And this takes place in the future? Sweet! And I wonder how the year came to be!
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I don't even know myself unless I expand upon the story.
You wrote something about a role-playing group.May I know what it is for-a game or a skit,something like that?It sounds like a plan there...
It's on the website Imvu which I no longer get on anymore.
MchectorII
Hello there,I could not help but 'happened' to come across your post and read your story.Firstly,I must say that it has quite an engaging plot as it gives an interesting idea of what might happen in the future(just wait for 43 more years and see if it is true)but it may not be too 'far-fetched' as the world of today is somewhat similar to the one in the story like the part about corruption and some secret organisation(well,maybe for the 'K9' project here with the part of memory chips replacing the 'right eye socket and parts of the brain on the right side',eww,I don't want to even know how they would do that...)Anyway,the story gets exciting quickly with new characters being introduced like the runner Hope,the under-cover cop Cifer and Dr Williams,if possible,could there be some background to these characters like what events happened before they all ended up meeting each other and what their lives were like before 2056?(it is quite funny to use past tense with the year people have not really gone through yet,oh well...)Please make a part two to this,if it is not too much trouble.Overall,great work on this and kudos for the effort and time used to make it.
Madara
Iv been thinking of making a part two for some time, I might post some different information on the characters some-time in the future. This story was actually for a role-playing group I was thinking of getting started but never really got the chance to.